Second Thesis II document draft

Make the changes that I requested on your previous draft as well as integrate suggestions from your peer reviewer and any changes you think should be made after re-reading. Highlight any changes you make to your document in yellow (if you're using Word or something with track changes, you can use that instead).

For each piece of feedback I gave, tell me how you addressed it in a comment on that document. These comments can be short; I just want some explicit acknowledgment that you made an effort to address each point.

Take a look at the sample thesis (linked to from the homepage) to see an example of a reasonable Thesis II document.

Submit your draft as a Word document or PDF.