Peer review (second draft)

Trade the Second draft of your Thesis proposal with a classmate. Read through their proposal carefully and make comments and suggestions. Use the following questions as a guide, but feel free to speak to other things you notice:

• is the proposal easy to understand what the project is and how it compares to existing work?
• is the writing technical, clear, and free of grammatical and spelling errors?
• are the diagrams clear and sufficiently detailed to understand how the project will be implemented? how could they be made better?
• would additional diagrams be helpful?
• are all of the thesis proposal components present? (see the Thesis proposal overview page)

Provide feedback in written form, either as comments in your classmate's Google Doc/Word document or in a separate text document. Share them with your classmate and upload them here.